Film Studies Screenplay 1st Draft

Film Studies Screenplay

Shot 1

External location – City Centre

Time – Midday

The band all meet in the city centre and Matt brings a magazine with him to the group

Dialogue: ‘’hey guys check this out!’’

 

Shot 2

External location – City Centre

Time – Midday

Close-up on magazine music chart and show the band’s latest song in the new entry zone at number 20.

Shot 3

External location – City Centre

Time - Midday

Camera goes back to the band to show them all happy and smiling.

Dialogue: ‘’I told you we would get somewhere one day’’ ‘’all this hard work is paying off!’’

Shot 4

Credited photo of ‘5 weeks later’

Shot 5

Internal location – Band practice room

Time – Afternoon

Kyle rushes into the practice room to inform the rest of the band some exciting news. Long shot will be used to show all characters in the scene.

Shot 6

Internal location – Band practice room

Time – afternoon

Close-up on magazine and their song is at number three in the magazine chart.

Shot 7

Credited Photo of ‘1 week later’

Shot 8

External location – Edward Street

Time – Late afternoon/evening

Jake hands Joe a magazine with their song at number one in the chart

Dialogue: ‘’Check it out man, we’re at number one in Kerrang’’ ‘’Wait until we tell the others!’’

Shot 9

External location – Edward Street

Time – Late afternoon/evening

Jake and Joe meet up on the way to the band practice room

Dialogue: ‘’did you notice Austin at last night’s gig?’’ ‘’Yeah his vocals are getting awful, what’s gotten in to him?’’ ‘’I don’t know but I’ve saw him hanging around with that guy Dave before the gig’’ ‘’Dodgy business that’’

Shot 10

External location – Outside of the practice room

Time – Evening

A low angle show looking up at Jake and Joe as they approach their practice room

Shot 11

Internal location – Practice room

Time – Evening

Medium show of Matt and Kyle sat in the practice room talking

Dialogue: ‘’ I wonder where everyone is’’ ‘’Yeah I’ve rang Austin several times today and no

Shot 12

Internal location – Practice room

Time – Evening

Medium shot as Jake and Joe enter the room, while Kyle and Matt look up at them

 

Shot 13

Internal location – Practice room

Time – Evening

Close-up on Jake asking the others if they had seen the magazine yet.

Dialogue: ‘’Hey guys, have you checked out the new Kerrang yet?’’ ‘’Yeah an, it’s unreal!’’

Shot 14

Internal location – Practice room

Time- Evening

Close-up on Matt

Dialogue: ‘’Have either of you two seen Austin? I’ve been trying to ring him all day!’’

Shot 15

Credited photo of ‘meanwhile at an unknown apartment complex’

Shot 16

Internal location – Apartment room

Time - Night

Close-up on Austin as he wakes up.

Dialogue: ‘’Oh Christ not again’’

Shot 17

Internal location – Apartment room

Time - Night

Austin sits up and looks at his phone, seeing that he has many missed calls from the band.

Dialogue: ‘’Oh fucking hell’’

Shot 18

External location – Outside the practice room

Time –Night

Austin arrives at the practice room. Low angle shot looking up at him as he opens the door.

Dialogue: ‘’Sorry guys I got held up somewhere’’ ‘’Yeah I’ll bet’’.

Shot 19

Internal location – Practice room

Time - Night

The band is rehearsing their set list when Austin seems to be losing his skill. Medium shot used to show full band with their instruments.

Shot 20

Internal location – Practice room

Time - Night

Jake aggravated at Austin and shouts at him. Close-up used on Jakes face.

Dialogue: ‘’Austin maybe if you spent more time in the real world rather than being an egotistical and self-absorbed prick you might be able to perform!’’

Shot 21

Internal location – Practice room

Time - Night

Austin gives sarcastic comment. Close-up on Austin’s face as he replies to Jake.

Dialogue: ‘’Well at least I’m good at what I do!’’

Shot 22

Internal location – Practice room

Time - Night

Jake launches himself forward punching Austin and band try to separate the attack but in the end result in the band being split in two. Close-up on all members of the band as the fight breaks out.

Dialogue: ‘’You mother fucker, you’re ruining this band!’’

Shot 23

Internal location – Practice room

Time - Night

The bands fight breaks up and everyone starts shouting while Kyle and Matt take Austin out of the practice room. Low angle shot used on Kyle and Matt as they take Austin away from the room.

Dialogue: ‘’Stop it, separate it guys!’’

 

Shot 24

External location – Outside the Practice room

Time - Night

Austin is being carried away by Kyle and Matt with a medium shot used as they carry him away from the area.

Shot 25

Internal location – Practice Room

Time – Night

Final shot is a Close-up on the magazine on the floor on the page with the song chart.

Synopsis Draft

Film Studies

Storyboard Planning and Synopsis

Genre – Drama

Story Type – The Gift Taken Away

Codes and Conventions – Dark lighting, night life

Protagonists – The band: Jake (The Lead Guitarist), Kyle (The Drummer), Austin (The Vocalist), Joe (The Bassist) and Matt (The Rhythm Guitarist).

Antagonists – Alcohol and Drugs

Synopsis

A band from the UK, start to make it big and decide that it would be best for their career if they move to the States to gain a larger fan base. After months of touring they finally get there and become a widely known band in their particular scene. However this leads to pressure on the band to keep their fame and skills but when Kyle and Joe give in to the influence of drugs and alcohol the band start to gain a bad reputation and lose their respect from across the music industry. This is what the gift taken away is in my story, their skill individually and in a band. They must face tough decisions in order to pursue their dreams. The main plot twist is when Jake and Austin start arguing and get into a fight which results in Joe taking Jakes side and Kyle and Matt taking Austin’s side. This is where in the story I think I will start my storyboard, as it will tell the tale of how the band manage to battle death and pull their act together and gain back the skills they once had in order to continue living the dream in their band without having to kick out any of the band members and regain respect from around the music industry.

I have been influenced by many things while planning my storyboard. For example I would have to say that my main influence was the band Asking Alexandria. Their self-destructive lifestyles inspired me to tell my tale of a band falling apart due to these issues and what they must do to keep going as a band.

 

Key Iconography of the Drama Genre

Film Studies

Real life issues and problems are iconographic of the drama genre because it is something that the audience can relate to and understand. This makes the audience always be able to understand the story line of the film as they can relate to what is happening and be sympathetic towards the protagonist. The Story line of drama films are often told like a journey. The classic everything is okay then something goes wrong which results in the disturbance in the film and the the equilibrium of the film where everything is resolved and leads to a happy ending. A happy ending is used in almost every drama film. This is because the audience believe the story more and understand that real life issues can be overcome. Otherwise the audience would not be satisfied with the ending if the protagonist did not resolve his problem in the film. Therefore a happy ending is essential to the drama genre and is why happy endings are used in almost all drama films. Sound exaggerated is often exaggerated in drama films. This is so the sounds of movement or a person sighing is heard and understood by the audience. This is because drama as a genre is very dramatic and therefore the sound in a drama film needs to be so that the audience or spectator knows how to feel.

Drama iconagraphy moodboard

My choosen sequence

Film Studies

The sequence that I have choosen to do for my storyboard is the confrentation part of the narrative. My 25 shots will include the band practicing and the vocalist Austin is not playing up to standard. That is when they start arguing and become aggravated with each other and start fighting. This will be the disruption in my narrative. I have choosen to so this section of my story because it is the main plot twist of my story so I thought that it would be the best scene to pick.

My storyboard will start with the band meeting up and going to their practice room. There is a minor argument on the way there because Austin admits to the group that he has recently started taking drugs and thinks that he has a growing dependancy for alcohol but due to his honesty the band support him and carry on. However when the band are practicing Jake and Matt start to become increasingly annoyed with Austin as his voice is getting worse and worse which means that he will be damaging the overall skill of the band. It then gets to a point where they can't take it anymore and lash out at Austin and a fight breaks out. My storyboard will finish on Jake and Matt leaving the practice room on a cliff hanger of the disruption/confrentation of my story.

Synposis draft 2

Film Studies

Storyboard Planning and Synopsis

Genre – Drama

Story Type – The Gift Taken Away

Codes and Conventions – Dark lighting, night life

Protagonists – The band: Jake (The Lead Guitarist), Kyle (The Drummer), Austin (The Vocalist), Joe (The Bassist) and Matt (The Rhythm Guitarist).

Antagonists – Alcohol and Drugs

Synopsis

A band from the UK, start to make it big and decide that it would be best for their career if they move to the States to gain a larger fan base. After months of touring they finally get there and become a widely known band in their particular scene. However this leads to pressure on the band to keep their fame and skills but when Kyle and Joe give in to the influence of drugs and alcohol the band start to gain a bad reputation and lose their respect from across the music industry. This is what the gift taken away is in my story, their skill individually and in a band. They must face tough decisions in order to pursue their dreams. The main plot twist is when Jake and Austin start arguing and get into a fight which results in Joe taking Jakes side and Kyle and Matt taking Austin’s side. This is where in the story I think I will start my storyboard, as it will tell the tale of how the band manage to battle death and pull their act together and gain back the skills they once had in order to continue living the dream in their band without having to kick out any of the band members and regain respect from around the music industry.

I have been influenced by many things while planning my storyboard. For example I would have to say that my main influence was the band Asking Alexandria. Their self-destructive lifestyles inspired me to tell my tale of a band falling apart due to these issues and what they must do to keep going as a band.

Drama genre presentation